EVALUATING THE ROUGH CUT

Scratch Rough Cut 1

Health Check 2: Pitch Feedback Response

After receiving feedback from our peers and teachers, we've come to the conclusion that: 

1) Our presentation was of appropriate length and good detail 
2) Our plot was original and suitable for our Genre choice
3) We've considered every aspect of Mise-En-Scene effectively: Sound and Lighting
4) All the sections of the Pitch was covered and fully explored. 

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To Improve: 
1) Add more images to our presentation. 
2) Finalise our Storyboard and make it more clear. 

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OUR RESPONSE: 
> We've made our posts more interactive and appealing, using a wide range of images and gifs - sometimes collages to display multiple images at once!
> We've also made multiple drafts of the Storyboard *See posts for reference

Planning: Original Storyboard (THE PITCH)

We've made a previous post, containing the draft of our Storyboard.
Here is the collage version of it: 

EDITING DAY 2

Editing! pic.twitter.com/JwhhjPWzm9

— Group1Set 1 Media (@ScratchMovie) December 8, 2016

EDITING DAY 1

Editing Day 1 | Working on Slo-mo & presenting our Main Title! pic.twitter.com/ODHQMLFItV

— Group1Set 1 Media (@ScratchMovie) December 5, 2016

Blogging Health Check 2

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 After receiving feedback: 

Thank you for your feedback, Mary! I've looked at my targets and since, have edited my posts to include comparison and inspirations from other movies. 

An example of this change is my post on our official Movie Title, where I've included inspirations from the TV Show: Lost; and the classic: Psycho. 

I've also posted my original Storyboard draft and planning on a collage to show the improvements over time.