Health Check 2: Pitch Feedback Response

After receiving feedback from our peers and teachers, we've come to the conclusion that: 

1) Our presentation was of appropriate length and good detail 
2) Our plot was original and suitable for our Genre choice
3) We've considered every aspect of Mise-En-Scene effectively: Sound and Lighting
4) All the sections of the Pitch was covered and fully explored. 

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To Improve: 
1) Add more images to our presentation. 
2) Finalise our Storyboard and make it more clear. 

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OUR RESPONSE: 
> We've made our posts more interactive and appealing, using a wide range of images and gifs - sometimes collages to display multiple images at once!
> We've also made multiple drafts of the Storyboard *See posts for reference